Thursday, July 30, 2009

Don't Take Me Seriously

So you’ll die
Silent and alone
So you say
Oh love
Why do you do this
What’s the motivation
To follow
In such dismal steps.
Ours is not a lonely world
Filled by far
Too full
With too much
Of inconsequence
When you drink
At night, alone
Do you think I don’t know?
You’ll die
Silent and alone
But only if you want.
Voluntary silence
From chosen solitude.
Die
Silent and alone
For pushing me away



- I don't like the ending. it sounds too menacing, but "because" doesn't sound good to me.

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